Melissa snorted. Even the memories. That was either the best marketing she’d ever seen or a cry for help.
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She paused at the iron gate, the one that still creaked under its own weight, and glanced at the rusted sign that hung askew: . A faint hum seemed to rise from the very stones, an echo of the countless nights the dome had once spun, tracking the heavens. Melissa slipped the gate open, its hinges protesting with a metallic whine that sounded almost like a warning. Melissa snorted
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